I thought of this while watching the TBFP Eternal Darkness stuff.
In purple because Mantorok is the man.
Pargon, pargon, pargon, pargon!
So I saw stumblonmytumbl’s picture and was inspired.
My favorite part of the game is when the character goes crazy.
Insanity bomb!
oh hey it’s just me cruisin along browsing the m/m slash part of adultfanfiction.net
oooh this story summary sounds interesting! let’s try reading it-
no.
Holy shit! That’s not a story that’s a brick wall of words!
My Account
So I’ve been trying and failing to get reviews for my original stories. I can’t seem to crack the code of a successful story. I like to think I’m a decent author and I come up with interesting characters and plots, but I’ve had some rather lack luster success. It’s gotten to the point that I’ve caved on my own author’s code multiple times to try and get views. Keep in mind I do still try to give my stories interesting plots, hell I’ve even written a prison story that has more to it than just prison smut
Title: The Chain
Summary:
Adin had been in prison for three years now and he was just starting to grow comfortable with it. He was fully prepared to live out his life sentence in peace. Then he came and changed everything.
Link: http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600105679
It is my most successful story with 39 reviews for 5 chapters that’s been up for months, but then there’s a story that’s been up for a few days, has 4 chapters and nearly twice the attention.
So I looked at that story and broke another code of mine and wrote sex into the first chapter, even throwing some stereotypical archetypes that slash fans seem to love. But again I try to give it a plot.
Title: Chaos
Summary:
Jaxon Banks was a drifter in a broken world caused by a group known as Chaos, he had been everything from a hitman to a thief. He didn’t care for anyone but himself until one night he saves the life of a young man with amnesia.
Link: http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600105940
This is mainly just a little frustrated rant but I’d love to hear some pointers from others about what I’m doing wrong. Read if you would like and maybe leave reviews on them? Please?
